,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

[Gul]

[Masood]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

Aks pichhli ruton ka aakhir thehar hi jata hai ...

bohat achha likha hai Gul bohat pasand aaya tumhara yeh kalaam bhi. Aur InPage mein pesh karney ka shurkiyah - bas zara apney spelling mistakes ko check ker letin :p :P

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

[Masood]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

Gulon per enayat to dhoop karti hai jab woh chamak kar gul ko husn bakhshti hai - main to dhalta huwa saya hoon .... khair.

Gawara key ooper pesh nahin dalni thi
THEHAR - they-hey-rey sey likha jata hai
CHUBHAN - Chey-bey-hey-noon sey hoti hai
Parwano key ooper pesh kyun daal di :p

:p bas yehi aik do teen char thi :D

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

Thanx Alot..:)

kuch tu hay kuch nahi :)

Gawar nahi ..Guzara hay :)
Parwanoun nahu
PUranoun hay :)
Baqi do... I will make it right:) inshaAllah

تُم کو کیا معلوم کہ کیسے گُزارا ہے
۔۔۔۔۔۔لگے تھے بُھلانے درد پُرانوں کو

[Masood]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

wonderful - bohat pyari nazam aur error free :zuban:

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

Adaaab:)

[Nisa*]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

bahut khobsurat
wasalaam..

[shanafridi]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

\GUL jee kia khoob likhti hai aap,muje bohot pasand ayee ap ki ye nice shaairi,plzzzzzz share karte rahiyega,thnx

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

bahut khobsurat
wasalaam..

Bohat Shukriya NISA jee

\GUL jee kia khoob likhti hai aap,muje bohot pasand ayee ap ki ye nice shaairi,plzzzzzz share karte rahiyega,thnx

and Bohat thanx Shan jee InshaAllah jald hee kuch new Poetry share karoon gee Thanx for liking!! :phool:

[shahid_naman]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

gul ge attcha file keder ha....?

[Daood]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

Bhohut khoob Gul

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

gul ge attcha file keder ha....?

Plz aap yeh link Follow Kijay


http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/5...hkadukheu7.gif

[KurriPunjaban]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

achi h g

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`,.Pichli Ruth ka Dukh,.*`,. By Gul

Taadi Merbaani...jee